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Come littel children - á tulille nice híni


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Beitrag Mi Sep 11 2013 7:45

Come littel children - á tulille nice híni

Inspiriert von habe ich das Lied, welches ursprünglich aus dem Film "Hocus Pocus" stammt, aber auch oft Edgar Allan Poe zugeschrieben wird, in Quenya übsersetzt - oder es zumindest versucht, das wird sich zeigen :D
Ich habe bewusst bei "I'll" (I will) Aurorist gewählt, weil es sich für mich einfach besser anfühlt. Ok, an einer Stelle habe ich für "we'll" (we will) dann doch Futur genommen, mal sehen, ob ich das auch noch ändere.
Normalerweise bin ich kein Freund von wörtlichen Übersetzungen, aber in diesem Fall war die Sprache schon poetisch genug, sodass ich fast eine 1:1 Übersetzung gewagt habe.
Bin gespannt, wie schlecht es geworden ist :biggrin:

á tulille nice híni, tulyanye oa len
Come little children, I'll take thee away,

norna ingóleo
into a land of Enchantment

á tulille nice híni, lúme tulië tyalita
Come little children, the time's come to play

hí tarwassenya
here in my garden of Shadows

á hilyalle netye híni, tentanye tië len
Follow sweet children, I'll show thee the way

ter nwalmali ar nwalmar
through all the pain and the Sorrows

á unainalle milya híni, ná coivie sina lé
Weep not poor childlen, for life is this way

nahta vanye ar maile
murdering beauty and Passions

sí larca meline híni, na sina lé
Hush now dear children, it must be this way

voronwave cuileo ar loicari
to weary of life and deceptions

sí á serille hínanyar, nauvalme rato oa
Rest now my children, for soon we'll away

séresse ar láresse
into the calm and the quiet

á tulille nice híni, tulyanye oa len
Come little children, I'll take thee away,

norna ingóleo
into a land of Enchantment

á tulille nice híni, lúme tulië tyalita
Come little children, the time's come to play

hí tarwassenya
here in my garden of Shadows
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Beitrag Mi Sep 11 2013 20:10

Leider kann ich zur Übersetzung nichts sagen, aber das Lied ist sehr schön!
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Beitrag Di Sep 24 2013 13:22

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Beitrag Mi Sep 25 2013 8:50

Vielen Dank für die ausführliche Korrektur. Ein paar Sachen sind mir schon selber aufgefallen. Ich muss einfach mal öfters was übersetzen, um die Grundregel mehr zu verinnerlichen ^.^
Ich werde alles mal in Ruhe durchgehen.

Was mir aber gleich am Anfang auffällt und was ich nicht verstehe ist
Warum á tule nice híni statt á tulille nice híni?
tule wäre doch der Aorist für 3. Sg. aber ist das Kinder in "Kommt kleine Kinder" nicht 2. Pl. (ihr kleinen Kinder, Kommt ihr)?
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Beitrag Mi Sep 25 2013 16:51

Genau, man sollte aber noch erwähnen, dass die Suffix-Imperativ-Form, von denen wir queta, cena, tira, hara und heka attestiert haben, ein -t im Singular und ein -l im Plural bekommen kann (aber nicht muss): hekat! "verschwinde!", hekal! "verschwindet!". Man könnte also auch *tulal! "kommt!" verwenden. Darüber, dass das auch mit á geht, ist nichts gesagt; aber es ist in jedem Fall die kurze Pronomialform -l, nicht die lange -lle/-lde.
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